Author's Note: This is a Character Development piece on Day and June from Marie Lu's book Legend.
In
Marie Lu’s book “Legend”, I learned that people can be extremely different than
what you might think they are. The main character is a boy named Day. He lives
in futuristic Los Angeles, where once you turn ten you take a trial. The trial
is an extremely important test. After you take the test you are sorted by how
well you did. For example: if you do extremely well, you would be put into one
of the best schools and train to be a soldier. Now let’s say you fail the test,
that means that you are sent to a special
camp where soldiers train you. Day failed his test, but when he was sent to
this camp the soldiers there tried to
kill him. Even though it was said to be impossible he got out. After living on the streets for a long time,
he met a girl named Tess. She was homeless and hungry, and he helped her. Ever
since that, Tess has stayed by Day’s side.
One
day, a few years after Day found Tess, the two kids were at a skiz fight. (A
skiz fight is an illegal way of fighting.) They were betting on the fighter
that had won every other fight that day, and when she lost the fight it cost
them 1000 notes. (their form of money) The girl they bet on lost to someone
that saved Tess’s life. People in the crowd had pushed Tess into the rink and
wouldn’t let her back out. So, instead, the mystery girl took Tess’s place.
This girl is currently undercover for the police, and is searching for Day.
After the fight, the girl left. In the rules, the winner has to stay and continue
to fight until they lose. The crowd got angry and went after her. Day had to
save her because of what she had done for Tess. Now that Day has saved this
girls life, she sees him differently. He saved her life. Is he really as bad as
she thought he was? The character Day reminds me of Percy from the Percy
Jackson series. They both were thought to be not good in the beginning, but
later on, people start to see who they really are.
Emily, Day didn't fail the test and I think you need to redo your conclusion, because there isn't really one. You need an introduction paragraph, main paragraph, and a conclusion paragraph.
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